The choice of words, rhythm and flow in the poem is absolutely brilliant. The poem absolutely depicts your personality and it clearly shows your creativity. Yes you are persistent. Yes you are caring. Hope so you will continue to entertain us through your creatives like this poem
Such an enthusiastic poem it is. Eloquent and fluent. I m really impressed by your excellent choice of words to describe yourself out and out in a short poem. The quote you used and the picture of sparking flame, both were really great ideas to describe your personality and I loved them. Both of these are quite enough to sketch your character. Exceptional Work bro.
The fluency of speech and clarity of meaning is commendable. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteThe choice of words, rhythm and flow in the poem is absolutely brilliant.
ReplyDeleteThe poem absolutely depicts your personality and it clearly shows your creativity.
Yes you are persistent.
Yes you are caring.
Hope so you will continue to entertain us through your creatives like this poem
The excellent choice of words and the mind put to the poem are both priceless. Really enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteThere is something about the way you put down your words. So magical.
ReplyDeleteYour personality matches the picture” A sparkling fire”. Really like your poem . Feeling proud of having classmates like you
ReplyDeletePersistent, persevering and a pheonix rising from its ashes. Perfect harmony. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteVery direct and beautifully balanced. Eloquence is always better than grandiloquence and this is a perfect example. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteExcellent choice of words and a clear picture of you spread onto paper!
ReplyDeleteSuch an enthusiastic poem it is. Eloquent and fluent. I m really impressed by your excellent choice of words to describe yourself out and out in a short poem. The quote you used and the picture of sparking flame, both were really great ideas to describe your personality and I loved them. Both of these are quite enough to sketch your character. Exceptional Work bro.
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